Addendum to Train...

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Notes from 7/10:
Additions-
+Heartbeat as overriding theme.
-Heartbeat transitions to train track thuds/passing shadows to heartbeat again.
-Train continually slows until it squeals to a stop at the point of death.

Possible additions-
+The train as a lifetime allegory. (original- mortality allegory)
-Moving from car to car, with doors locking behind.
-Virgil(AKA Death) showing up in closer and closer seats.
+The characters only communicating on heart/track beats.
+Train whistle as flatline noise?

"'Look! Here is Dis, and this the place where you
will have to arm yourself with fortitude.'
O reader, do not ask of me how I
grew faint and frozen then- I cannot write it:
all words would fall far short of what it was.
I did not die, and I was not alive;
think for yourself, if you have any wit,
what I became, deprived of life and death."
-Dante Alighieri

Pending-
+Style studies (7/12)
+Amended storyreel (7/15)